Thursday, February 14, 2019

I define "haiku"


HAIKU – 272 words

Haiku poems originated in Japan over a thousand years ago, and remain a perennially popular medium of written expression for poTets and everyday peepholes of all nations and ages.
The poem as a standard (there are variations) consists of seventeen syllables – always arranged in three line totaling seventeen syllables: five on the first line; seven on the second line; five on the third line.

The haiku typically describe a scene in nature, and allow the writer freedom withing the form to express himself creatively in bringing the emotions to his reader in a subtle way which he experienced while writing or actually living the haiku moment himself. He may choose an experience that insured him in the Great Outdoors and his challenge is to reduce it to seventeen syllables in three lines.
Most Haiku avoid what I call “sentimentalism”, “editorializing”, or ‘’passing judgment’’ on the creatures, objects or happenings described in the scene. Thus, a writer may express sentiment by simply avoiding descriptive words like adverbs and adjectives, per se, and thereby allow his readers the free reign of their own imaginations.
Think of your favorite coloring book. Its simple black lines on white paper evoke feelings without color, and urge you to fill in the scene your own way.
By keeping in the simple, yet profound format of five-seven-five, the haiku creator joins his peers in fulfilling creative outlets in simple, yet profound ways. It is a fascinating art form.

Here is a haiku from my neighborhood yesterday on the way to work and school with my wife:

                                Dark frosty morning
                                On our street a deer a car
                                Narrowly missing

EDIT – 96 words

A haiku is a kind of Japanese nature poem in seventeen syllables on three lines:
Five-seven-five. The poet intends to express himself minimally and without judgment, thereby allowing his audience to supply the passion in the reading. Most Haiku thus avoid sentiment or editorializing.
Think of a haiku as a page from a coloring book you love. The artist supplies an outline; you fill it in with your own colors and styles.

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